SSC2007 - Adult - The Office Bully (499 Words)

This story is fiction and deals with spanking and corporal punishment. If such subjects are offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor please leave now.

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"Thank you for seeing me Miss Thomson as it is after office hours."

"No problem Mrs James. Please it's Pat. Always a pleasure to see the mother of one of my office juniors. I often work late. How can I help?"

"Nicola really likes it here but one manager is bullying her."

"Really?"

"Yes, so I have come to you, Pat, being her boss."

"I will make enquiries. Is that ok, err, Mrs James?"

"Not really. You already know who it is."

Pat looked decidedly embarrassed.

"Do I?" she said sheepishly.

Mrs James stood up slowly. Pat became increasingly uncomfortable.

She lent down eyeing her daughters boss and hissed "Yes Pat." Pat made to stand up but Mrs James forced her to stay seated.

"Do you know what it is like to be bullied? Made to feel helpless."

"Please Mrs James."

"Scared Pat? Thought so. Now let's get our names sorted out. I will call you drippy. You will address me as Miss. Go on drippy, try it."

"Please don't," Pat said more forcefully.

"Listen drippy. I am going to do exactly what I want. I am certainly stronger than you. But I suppose you might try to run for it. Get undressed."

"What!" she exclaimed. No way."

"No way? Really? Want to try me drippy. Do you?"

Pat looked at her tormentor. They were similar in age and height but Mrs James was more powerful and Pat knew she wouldn't win any fight. She looked away. Distraught. She stood and reluctantly removed her shirt and bra, let her skirt fall to the floor and removed her knickers. Naked, exposed, she looked at Mrs James and said quietly "Sorry Miss."

"Right drippy, let's have you over my lap." It was a statement.

Pat went ashen. Mrs James sat on Pat's own chair and tapped her leg. Pat knew she was defenceless, powerless to stop her, and bent across her lap.

Pat cried as the spanks rained down on her. After what seemed an age she was released, stood up, sobbing, rubbing her bottom.

"I'm so sorry really I am Miss..." she said tailing off.

"Good. Now you know what it is like to be bullied. Get used to it." Mrs James eyed the naked woman she now controlled. "Come here drippy" she whispered.

Mrs James pulled Pat in to her, hugged her waist, put her hand on her burning bottom, rubbing it, slowly. Pat looked up at Mrs James, this time she did not look away. Their heads moved closer.

They hugged and kissed, passionately.

"So, drippy. Nicola's at a friend for a sleepover. Come back to mine for dinner."

"Whatever you say. What then Miss?"

"Another hard spanking before I put you to bed. Of course I'll be joining you."

"Oh." Pat smiled then remembered the spanking.

"Do you have to spank me if I promise I won't bully Nicola again Miss?"

"The spankings will remind you not to drippy." She slapped Pat's bottom and laughed. Pat didn't.

I thought the premise of this story had some fascinating possibilities but the manner of telling it lost a lot of them.  I thought this could have been a vehicle for really focusing on Pat's reaction to suddenly finding herself the object of corporal attention rather than in her usual dominant bullying role but too much dialogue - delivered in a rather understated manner - left the delectable potential of this a bit flat. I wasn't convinced by the throwing in of the sudden amorous attentions of Mrs. James to her victim either.  It seemed a distraction from the original righteous purpose of the visit.  It's a shame because this could have been so much better.

A hot little number with a few surprises and lots of steam.  I thoroughly enjoyed this story and would have liked it to be longer, but, of course, it couldn't be.

I liked how things changed near the end.  Realizing what was really going on made it a much hotter story for me.   These kinds of stories are a hot concept for me, though as often as I've fantasized about doing something like that, I'm not sure how good I'd be at it.

I liked the idea behind this story, but this story isn't strong enough.  The ending ruins the feel of the strict female disciplinarian. The plot, however, is one I haven't seen in a story before and that's excellent.  Props for that.  Better writing and a higher word limit may be more suited to this author.

Well, this was a cute story...an interesting plot idea but the almost complete lack of punctuation did make it a bit hard to follow. The segue from punishment to sexy fun was a bit abrupt and I really didn't get the insult 'drippy' at all... no clue where it came from. It felt more like a personal fantasy snippet, than an actual story, although the base idea was definitely intriguing.