adult
Leaving the Lifestyle
by
the Crimson Kid

"LEAVING THE LIFESTYLE" by the Crimson Kid [Category: Adult] {508 words}

(All rights reserved. This story's setting is early August of 1985 in the U.S.A.)

Miriam Palace's arched eyebrows caught the gaze of Marcella Valentine, who shrugged in response.

They observed as Miriam's cousin, Paul Royalton, endured his fourth bare-assed walloping of the evening--like the first one it was being administered by Brittany Symington, his one-time girlfriend, with a vengeance.

Miriam had dished out Paul's second spanking with a wooden spoon and Marcella, who in earlier days had babysat the other three, had delivered the third with her fearsome hairbrush, but those had merely been sound fanny-whackings with undercurrents of deep affection. They had produced yelps and squirms, well-reddened boyish buttcheeks and eventually a few trickling tears, but that was all--they were farewell ceremonies.

Brittany's assaults on Paul's supporter-framed naked hindquarters, the first with her doubled-over thick leather belt and the ongoing one with her hardwood racketball paddle while her victim was pinned over her left thigh, seemed quite different in tone. The strapping had lasted for over ten minutes while the paddling was approaching the twelve-minute mark, Brittany continuing steadfast as she vehemently cracked her implement's flat striking surface against her ex-boyfriend's glowing, magenta-hued southern hemispheres.

"Brittie, stop!" Miriam finally interceded at the fifteen-minute mark. "Enough already, this is supposed to be a friendly good-bye."

Her face flushed, the younger woman halted the spanking. "Sure, Miriam, I was just having...one final fling, spankwise."

"What do you mean?" Marcella asked while helping Paul, blubbering helplessly, to his feet.

"I've given up the lifestyle," the pretty brunette announced.

"Luh-uhhh-ifestuh-style?" Paul gingerly pulled up his sweatpants.

"Spanking," his one-time sweetheart explained. "Now that I'm married, I won't be delivering any more butt-blisterings--Jasper doesn't believe in marital punishments."

Miriam sniffed. "No, I wouldn't figure he would--at least not you walloping him."

"Not the reverse either," Brittany insisted, "Although Jasper wears the pants in our household."

The other three were momentarily speechless, each wordlessly sharing similar thoughts: Brittany had been extremely interested in spanking, especially from the administering side, ever since they'd known her. She'd also always been strong-willed and quite independent, making the marriage to her boorish, domineering husband a month earlier quite surprising.

"Nuh-No more spah-spanking?" Rubbing the seat of his sweats, Paul felt as though Brittany had just applied her future lifetime's worth of smacks to his bare derriere.

The next day, during 500-mile drive to the city where he had two job interviews scheduled, Paul shifted uncomfortably on his prickling-warm behind and pondered Brittany's decision. He would be starting over himself, presuming he found the employment he was seeking, in a new location. He'd been subject to regular bare-bottomed chastisements, from various females, throughout the past decade--but that life was over.

Could he truly leave the spanking lifestyle?

Two days later, chatting with a postdoctoral sociology student at the university, Paul confronted that issue.

"It's called the Spenser Spanking Plan," the beautiful young woman informed him. "I'm doing research on marital relationships in the early twentieth century, but this idea of domestic discipline strikes me as...just childishly ridiculous."

Shrugging, he smiled at Barbara Evangell. "I agree completely..."

{The End}

skull reviews

This is another of those stories which seems to have a lot of candy floss around the outside with grand relationships that sound as if they are set in Newport, RI or somewhere opulent, but when you get to the inner core it is just the submissive male receiving punishment from various women for heaven knows what reason. This plot is so ten-a-penny that I get bored reading it and its not just because I'm a top. I find stories of women beoing beaten just for the sake of it equally tedious because the theme is repeated ad infinitum.

OK The Spencer Spanking Plan got thrown in at the end but ...yanno..yeah..OK

~ Alex Birch

An intriguing story, with a solid spanking in it.  Parts of it were a bit difficult to follow, but over-all it was an enjoyable story.

~ Barrister

This story was well written but that's about it.  The beginning doesn't tell you much about the story, it's unclear what's going on, and why.

~ Kate James

This story is about a decision that many of us make at one time or another. After too much hurt or frustration a lot of us walk away from 'the Lifestyle' for a time. That's what happens here... one person because she has married a vanilla man. The other because he has moved away from his spanking friends. Both are quite typical reasons to leave the scene and the story is very realistic in that way.

It's a subject not often written about, although it should be, considering how many of us do it. Having recognized this author's distinctive writing style (as well as the character names) I am not surprised about the richly detailed spanking scene he creates. I enjoyed the piece and it was well written...but it didn't seem to evoke any particular emotion in me.

Leaving the scene after all those years... there should have been more emotion, I thought. From at least one of the characters, but both seemed....very blasé about the whole thing. I really felt there should have been... something. Otherwise it was very well done.

~ Kessily

The author's enthusiasm is clear, but it's indulged so much that he forgets to actually tell a story. The effect is of overhearing a very private scene involving people one has no knowledge of, and whose actions are hard to fathom.

Some specific gripes. The cutesy language at times reaches heights of silliness that are like some sort of bad parody ('her ex-boyfriend's glowing, magenta-hued southern hemispheres'). Clearly this is the author's chosen style, but it completely distracts from the narrative. Also, the use of so many full names ('Miriam Palace', 'Marcella Valentine', etc.), when space is so limited is strange and wasteful. What does it matter to *this story* what their full names are? It doesn't, of course. This is merely one small chapter in a longer saga - which is the prerogative of the author, but death to any story which seeks to have any merit on its own terms.

~ Pablo