child
The Plan
by
Peter Martin

This story is fiction and deals with spanking and corporal punishment. If such subjects are offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor please leave now. The writer does not condone the actual spanking of children

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SSC2007 - Child - The Plan (499 Words)
by Peter Martin

Jenny's lay on her bed, on her stomach, her red bottom stinging. Thinking about her plan.

She had wanted to get her Mum to spank her to find out what it was like. Lots of her friends were spanked, even at fourteen years old.

She didn't think she could ask so she thought up her plan.

She had been very rude, calling her mother lots of horrible names. Mum had been really cross with her, grabbed her arm, marched her to a chair, sat down, lifted her skirt, tugged down her knickers, and put her across her lap.

That was pretty much as planned.

The spanking had really really hurt though, much more than she ever thought it would. Jenny hated the spanking. She thought she wouldn't but she did.

"OK Jenny, Now, go to your room. I will come up in ten minutes to discuss this further young lady."

Jenny lay on her bed. Her bottom still stinging. The plan had worked so far.

She had worked out what to say to her Mum.

She knew she couldn't say she wanted to be spanked to see what it was like. She had been naughty plenty of times before, but Mum had only scolded her and never spanked her. That's why she had to be so very rude. To make sure.

No, she decided it was better to apologise very sincerely, and Mum will say no more spankings for her. That was her plan.

Her door opened. Mum walked in and sat on the bed.

"So Jenny, why were you so rude to me?"

"I'm very sorry Mum. You've really taught me a lesson. I won't do it again."

"That's all very well my girl, but you practically asked for a spanking by being so rude. You know your cousins get spanked, and they have never been so rude to Aunty Kate."

Jenny panicked. She changed her plan and decided to tell the truth. "Yes, that's it. I wanted to see what it was like. But I am so so sorry Mum." she said even more sincerely.

"That would have been more plausible, and I would have spanked you if you had asked Jenny. But is that now just one of your lies?"

"I don't lie" retorted Jenny sharply, then seeing her mothers face added quietly "much."

"That's more like it. Maybe being spanked will be better discipline for you than just an adult discussion. You even said yourself the spanking taught you a lesson."

"Please Mum. No. I won't need to be spanked again. Please" She certainly didn't want another spanking. That wasn't in the plan.

Her Mum thought for a moment, it seemed an age, and then told her daughter her decision. "Well young lady, I haven't spanked you before, but I can see it has really worked with you. So in future, when you are naughty expect a good hard spanking."

Jenny lay on her bed, feeling sorry for herself. That bit didn't go as planned.

skull reviews

The idea of a youngster feeling the urge to be spanked and conniving to get a spanking is not a new one. Nothing wrong with that, for there area limited number of spanking 'plots'and they all get rehashed.  I just felt that this story was a bit 'soggy'.  It sort of laboured through the start premise and by the time it got to the end the plot kind of tailed off into nothing.  I was hoping for a sudden devilish twist, for example mom having anticipated what was going through her daughter's mind and producing a hairbrush or something to deter her altogether,but instead it sort of terminated in a non event.  A good try but nothing to lift me off my chair

~ Alex Birch

This story is a classic, "be careful what you wish for" tale.  It is written in a realistic style which I enjoyed very much.

~ Barrister

Talk about "be careful what you wish for"!  Those kinds of plans never go the way you figure, and I know from personal experience!  This was short and to the point, and gave a nice glimpse into the world of a spanko-curious teenager, which I think a lot of us were at some point.

~ Jen

The simple prose and pleasing repetition of 'the plan', and 'her plan', and 'planned' give this the feel of some sort of traditional morality tale, and the way things turn out is consistent with that. In other ways the simplicity doesn't work so well. Character motivation is very sketchy; significant actions happen with no particular trigger. The voices don't exactly sound like real people - they just say whatever is needed to have the plot move in the intended direction. What *could* be interesting about a scenario like this is the underlying emotion, but it's barely acknowledged.

~ Pablo