Daddy's Little Girl
Category: Edge

"My dad's home. Come on, Jenny." Petit twenty-four year-old Katie Lott grabbed her friend by the arm and led her into her father's house. Katie was visiting him for the weekend, and she brought her new best friend, Jenny, along. The young ladies stepped into the house to find Mr. Lott emerging from the kitchen. Katie ran forward and embraced him, giving him a kiss on the cheek. "Dad, this is Jenny." "Oh yes! Jenny!" Mr. Lott gave her a quick hug. "Katie here has told me all about you. Make yourself at home. Spaghetti is almost ready."

The three of them ate and talked. After they finished, Katie cleared her throat and spoke. "Dad since I'm here again, I want to you know? Soon? Jenny can watch." Mr. Lott smiled. "I knew you would be asking soon about your 'fix'. I'll go get it. You go shower. Hurry." Katie ignored Jenny's questions as she ran to the bathroom. A minute later, Jenny heard water running in the bathroom. It was a quick shower. Katie emerged from the bathroom naked. She had dried herself completely, but didn't dress. "Katie! What?" Jenny started. "You'll see. It's a lot of fun." Katie replied. Jenny was stunned. Her mature friend was suddenly acting very giddy and childlike. She wasn't even trying to be modest. "I'm ready, dad!" shouted Katie with a smile.

Mr. Lott entered the room carrying a huge wooden pink paddle. Jenny stared at it with curiosity. One side was decorated. "KATIE" was written in glitter and beads, and the "i" was dotted with a heart. Also drawn, were a smiley face and the words "Mr. Spanky" on it. She had even written onomatopoeic words on it, like "ouch", "whack", "oww", and "pop". The other side was undecorated. Jenny thought that it looked absolutely monstrous, but Katie was obviously excited.

Mr. Lott gripped the paddle tightly with both hands and spoke in a stern voice. "Alright little lady. Bend over and grab those ankles. I'm going to paddle you hard. Stick that naked little bottom out." Katie eagerly bent over. Mr. Lott promised to paddle hard, and that he did. He hit Katie's offered up bottom with full force, resulting in a loud "POP!" that echoed in the room and a squeal of pain and pleasure from Katie. He hit her nine more times before she stopped him. "Thank you daddy! I'll be a good girl now." Jenny's mouth hung open in shock. Mr. Lott decided that now was a good time to say something to Jenny. "I made this paddle when Katie was fourteen so I could keep her in line, but when I found out she enjoyed being spanked, I made it a special treat. It keeps us close and lets us bond. She'll always be my little girl." Hours later, curiosity got the better of Jenny, but the paddle still frightened her. She ended up naked over Mr. Lott's lap as his hand furiously smacked her naked buttocks.

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I put this story in the edge category because Katie regresses psychologically in the story as her friend watches in confusion. It shows a unique bond that Katie has with her father. The fact that it was important for Katie to take a shower before the paddling hints at a sort of past ritual that Jenny doesn't understand, therefore sparking curiosity in her. This curiosity is tempered by a certain reluctance, which leads Jenny to take a hand spanking rather than a paddling.

Well an interesting kind of plot here where what seems at the beginning to be a very tasteless child scenario turns out to be ..well...I think the writer has written his/her own explanation at the end.

It was OK as far as it went. I'm not a great fan of 'Daddy' stories, they all tend to go down a familiar well rutted path but this was nice enough.

Interestingly different plot-line which sparked my imagination quite a bit.  I"m not so sure I'd call this edgy for the reasons the author does, but more for the implied incestuous nature of the relationship. Either way, the story is hot and evocative.

Good story, with that slight creepiness thrown in for good measure. I've had fantasies where there was a "special" bond between father and daughter, where the line between what would be seen as a normal relationship and what would seem perverted was blurred.   The one thing that I see as edgy, is how the girl doesn't mind being naked in front of her father.  A young woman, unless she was raised as a nudist, would normally be appalled to be naked in that situation, not looking forward to it.

Age play is an interesting concept and something I would have difficulty writing about, so I greatly admire your creativity and ingenuity in being able to write about it.  You did a nice job.  I felt this story was well written and easy to follow.  It made be believe this sort of interaction was possible between a father and daughter.  I think women often feel like "little girls" around their dad even after they grow up.  While the character in your story embraced that, I have a hunch that most women prefer not to feel that way, so that also made it interesting to me.

Ageplay is tough to write -- especially when the classic turnabout of surprise (the reveal that everyone is really adult) is taken out of the picture.  This story seems to struggle with the cute elements of the roleplay while referencing the disassociative strangeness that can come out in such psychodrama moments.  I'm not sure this story is entirely successful -- perhaps due to the length constraints.  The conversation felt a bit forced there at the end.