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The Visit
Peter Martin

pmartin242003 (at) yahoo (dot) co (dot) uk

Category: Adult

“Hullo Jonathan"

“Hullo Miss Dodson."

His Mother is a regular Client of mine. My Company provides a service to parents to discipline their children who live away from home. They pay our travelling expenses and a time charge for someone like me, fully trained to discipline anyone of any age.

“I believe you are expecting me."

“Well yes, but"

“I will come in thank you."

I strode passed the young man. 20 years old, in his second year at University.

“Right" he murmured, and let me pass.

I turned and looked at him “Shall we get on. Please take off your trousers and pants."

“I need to ask something first" he pleaded.

“Quickly then" I snapped.

“I know my Mother has sent you, but I haven't done anything wrong this time."

“I see. Yet when she phoned yesterday afternoon you didn't answer even though she specifically told you to stay in and revise."

“I was in. The phone didn't ring. Honest."

I went to the phone and lifted the receiver. The dial tone was clearly there.

“Really?" I asked.

“I know it works now, and I thought it did yesterday, but it didn't ring."

“I can't have this arguing. You know the choice. You can accept your punishment as instructed by your Mother, or you can phone her and query it. You know the risk. So, decide please."

He knew all right. Our Contract says the punishment, and fee, is doubled if it still goes ahead after querying. We insist on it to keep our time to a minimum.

He looked at the floor, thinking, remembering he had phoned his Mother last time and she insisted the punishment be given so he got double then. Quietly he said “I won't make the call."

“Right. So again, remove your trousers and pants whilst I check what I will be giving you."

I looked at the handheld. Ah, 150 spanks over my lap and 24 with my strap. I took the strap from my bag. Jonathan was moving a chair over. Of course, a regular recipient of the service.

I sat down and Jonathan obediently bent across my lap.  No scolding was scheduled. I gave him his 150 spanks, which he struggled with towards the end, but the strap really got him crying. A job well done.

He got dressed and calmed down. The phone rang. He answered it.

“Really? But when I called this morning I was told it had been working …. What do they mean another department  …. Too late, she's done it already …. that's just shit"

He immediately realised his mistake, rubbed his bottom, looked at me with tears welling up and said despondently “It's my Mother. She checked herself and rang to stop you."

He handed me the phone.

“Of course Madam. Understandable. Double for swearing at you. Yes, charged to your account. Very good. Maybe he will learn Madam."

“Now young man, double eh. A profitable visit for me and I hope educational for you.


Readers Comments:
Zoey:  zprymantis (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com

The fantasy of a contracted spanking by an emotionally uninvolved third party is one that I enjoy.  That made this spanking story fun for me to read.  I got a bit muddled up with the wording at times, and had to reread parts of it to be clear on who was speaking and what they were saying.  This is probably more a result of the 500 word limit than anything else.  Clever ideas, and fun story.
CK:  CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com

Well, damn it all, the male spankees just can't win in this author's stories, can they? (That's not intended as a criticism though, it would be personally hypocritical for me to protest such a fictional situation and besides that unfair spankings can be highly appealing.) Even though Jonathan ended up being cleared of his original offense it was a bit too late since there's no way (unless perhaps Superman is involved) of taking back a good butt-blistering once it's been given, and his realization of that fact resulted in his impulsive use of a rather mild curseword.

In a fair fictional world, I'd expect that under the circumstances his mother would forgive the use of slight profanity–which wasn't actually directed at her person, just the situation–or at the very least consider it having been paid for in advance via the undeserved sound chastisement Jonathan had already received from his "designated spanker" (Miss Dodson). However, it wasn't an equitable place that he existed within, so Jonathan ended up facing a doubled follow-up punishment while Miss Dodson however ended up making considerably more money from the initial mistake–"It's an ill wind that blows nobody good."

I found this account to be amusingly and delightfully victimizing of its poor, punished and soon-to-be-more-punished protagonist, I particularly enjoyed the smug, clinical self-satisfaction reflected in the speech and thinking of the narrator (Miss Dodson).

Unfair spankings forever! In fantasy, anyway…

Jess:  peaceluvnbooks (at) clovermail (dot) net

I really enjoyed the twist at the end of this story. The idea of a boy letting a word like that slip out even just after a spanking is believable because of the unfair situation.

The actual spanking itself seemed kind of sterile to me.  In that I mean it wasn't described in great detail and the emotions of neither the boy nor the spanker were conveyed.  I think any of those elements would have enhanced the story.  I really did want to know more about the spanking because the overall story really was quite good.  The spanking service, the potential penalty for arguing, the technological mix-up and its unfortunate consequences… all interesting elements to include in a spanking piece.

Domino:  domino at Domin-o (dot) org (dot) uk

My question is, if this mom is that involved, why didn't she either move to wherever her son was in college or force him to go to school in their home town.

But that would spoil the fantasy!  I know many spankos have longed for a no-nonsense dial-a-punishment service.

Unfortunately the spanking was confined to only one short paragraph, putting this story, for me anyway, into the 10-minute twist-in-the-tail genre frequently found in women's magazines.