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| Just A Phone Call Would Do Peter Martin pmartin242003 (at) yahoo (dot) co (dot) uk Category: Adult
“Really Ben! What else can “now you are back home all the old rules will apply" possibly mean? That clearly includes phoning when you are late." “I didn't think you meant it Mum." “Well now you know." “I'm 26 Mum. Are you really going to spank me?" “Just like always Ben. Come on, let's deal with this." Ben knew better than to argue. In just moments he was across his Mother's lap having his bare bottom soundly spanked. Ten minutes later his Mother rested, and said “so you understand what I mean now do you Ben?" “Yes" he sobbed. “I did think Ben that when you got married that would be it. What happened?" Ben had calmed down. He didn't try to get up because his Mother always insisted on an “adult" discussion partway through his spanking. “It just didn't work out Mum. Sarah was so unreasonable." “And you walked out." “Yes." “Were you at fault do you think?" “No. She just didn't understand me. She complained about everything. Yesterday she told me off for not phoning when I was late." “Really? She complained about you not phoning?" “Yes Mum, I just said." Several hard spanks landed on his already reddened bottom. “Do not be offhand with me my lad" she snapped. “Sorry Mum" Ben gasped. “Yet when I complained about you being late tonight and not phoning look what happens. You are across my lap being spanked." “But you are my Mum. She isn't. I'm all grown up now." “Really. All grown up but still needing to be spanked?" “Yes" he said quietly, beginning to understand. “Maybe if Sarah spanked you then you would remember to phone." “But I shouldn't still be spanked if I'm the man of the house." “Think about this then" she said and spanked his bottom for several very uncomfortable minutes “Tell me the difference Ben." “I don't know Mum" he wailed. “I will tell you then. Sarah is a caring responsible woman whilst you are more often than not thoughtless and juvenile." “But she tells me off Mum." “Like I do you mean?" “Yes" he said quietly. “She's a lot like me isn't she Ben" she said in a calmer tone. “Yes" he accepted. “You do know why you married her?" “Why?" “Because you fell in love with a woman who is so like me she is your natural choice." “Really?" “Absolutely." “I didn't think Mum. You're right." “So you see you need to let Sarah spank you, just like I do. Agreed?" “Agreed Mum" Ben said cheerfully. “Thanks Mum." “Good boy. You better get up now." Ben was about to pull his trousers up when Sarah entered the room. “Not yet Ben" Sarah said as she sat down on the chair. “Ben! Remember what we just said" his Mother warned. Ben nodded. The effect of agreeing struck home. He lay obediently across Sarah's lap. As she spanked him she snapped “in future darling remember to phone." “I will" he said through his tears. |
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| Zoey:
zprymantis (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com I have to agree with the main theme of this story, we marry someone like one of our parents! In this case, Ben is finding that out. It's another universe this author takes us to; one where a good sound spanking is the key to marital bliss. LOL! I liked this story and found it to be well written and easy to follow. |
| Alex:
alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk The story was well written but, as I've said many times before, these F/M punishment stories are not my cup of tea and I feel the situation of mature men lying across the knees of their mothers so bizarre that it is difficult for me to get past that as a reader. ...and I know that's not fair on the writer but personal aversions are hard to conquer. That said the story didn't really offer much in the way of the unexpected either in that the subordinated 'Oedipal' mother-figure in such a relationship is quite a common thread. Nice enough its way. Well enough written but didn't pull up any trees for me, plot wise, and certainly is not my choice of spanking format. |
| Hal:
janhaltn (at) gmail (dot) com This story did not have a good flow to it. It was choppy. The ending was interesting but left a lot of unanswered questions. Did he know ahead of time that Sarah was there or was it a total surprise? Did he return to his wife and did she continue to spank him on a regular basis? I think a few additional words would have helped this story. I hope this writer will continue to write for us. |
| Jess:
peaceluvnbooks (at) clovermail (dot) net This is an interesting story in that it does demonstrate how an adult married relationship can often mirror a parent/child one. The author did a fabulous job of showing those parallels. I found this story a little difficult to believe. I think it's unlikely that the mother would be spanking her 26-year-old, or that if she was that it would be for the exact same thing that his wife had complained about the night before. And even if I thought those first two items were believable, I find it unlikely that the wife would just happen to walk in at the end of the spanking. Or that if she did, that she would've heard the conversation, and would be accepting of the idea right away. It may have been a fun twist if Sarah and the mother had talked and they had planned the spanking and her entrance before-hand, but that's not what happened here. Along similar lines, some extra info about the situation would have enhanced the story. I know that can be difficult in a short story, but I think that even a the addition of a little info on the setting might have gone a long way. I did really like the dialogue style of the story. I also enjoyed the way in which the conversation was well mixed in with the actions of the spanking. The concept that a mother would try for an adult conversation mid-spanking did seem to make sense in a way because her words would have been emphasized both before and after by her hands. |