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Starting Up All Over Again
Grace Brackenridge

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Category: Coming of Age

(c) 2008 by Grace Brackenridge

This is a work of fact and fiction. The author does not in any way endorse the spanking of real children in real life.


"Are you sleepyheads going to lie around all day?" asked Mrs. Vanderhooten, poking her head inside.

I lay next to 13-year-old Marcella Vanderhooten on her bed.

Marcella's window opened over the backyard where Mr. Vanderhooten labored over a lawnmower. Birds chirped. Down the street, children squealed. A dog barked.

"We're swapping music, Mom," said Marcella, as if our iPods and my laptop weren't proof enough.

"When you were younger," said her mom, folding her arms, "you only stayed in bed all day when your father spanked."

"Really?" I giggled. "My folks haven't spanked since I turned 12."

"Goodness!" Mrs. Vanderhooten chuckled. "You're overdue."

"Yeah!" I teased back. "I've turned into an awful brat."

I suspect Mom and Dad would probably agree.

Stepping to the window, she called down. "Daniel, when you're done, would you mind coming up here and spanking Grace?"

"Why?" he called back.

"A long story. Just do it."

I laughed. "That's why I like you, Mrs. Vanderhooten. You kid around."

She winked. "Be good or I won't tell him I'm joking."

– – – – –

"Let's get this over with," said Mr. Vanderhooten 20 minutes later, opening Marcella's bedroom door.

"Daddy, what are you doing?" demanded Marcella as he stepped over to her bed.

"Doing what your mother asked," he replied, guiding me up and over his lap.

"Mom was kidding, Daddy! Ask her!"

"She went shopping," he replied, pulling down my panties. "Left a note on the counter."

"Daddy, STOP!"

"Marcella, don't get in trouble," I suggested. "We'll straighten this out when your mother gets home."

SMACK! SMACK! SMACK!

– – – – –

"I'm so sorry, Grace," said Mrs. Vanderhooten, putting away groceries as Marcella and I told her what happened.

"It's not your fault," I replied. "It's nobody's fault actually. Especially Mr. Vanderhooten. He just did what he was supposed to do. Don't tell him, please."

They agreed.

"Well, after two years of no spankings," Mrs. Vanderhooten asked, "how does it feel now?"

"Pretty much the same," I replied evasively, rubbing my behind.

– – – – –

"Thanks, Mr. Vanderhooten," I said as I prepared to leave. "I haven't been spanked in a long time."

I expected Mom's car to pull up outside any minute now.

"You're welcome, Grace," he replied, looking up from his magazine. "But I never learned the reason why."

Marcella glanced knowingly at me and her mother.

"A long story," I laughed. "Let's just say I needed it."

– – – – –

"So," asked Mom as we drove home, "how was the sleep-over?"

"Mom," I said, "I know Dad didn't want to stop spankings when I turned 12. True, some teenage girls don't get spanked, but others do. Some parents stop and then start up spankings all over again."

Taking a deep breath, I asked, "Mom, how open-minded are you about starting up spankings again?"

"Funny you should ask," she said, eyes on the road. "Mr. Vanderhooten called earlier, saying his wife said to spank you, but Mrs. Vanderhooten had gone shopping. He asked my opinion."

"What did you say?"

Mom turned to me and smiled.


Readers Comments:
Mary:  gemcollector2001 (at) yahoo (dot) com

They say that the body knows what it needs when it feels that something is just "off" I wonder if that is true about discipline. It seems that Grace does know or at the very least has a pretty feeling in her gut for that very thing in this piece.

The author did an excellent job presenting the usual suspects, of what could happen when a joke goes wrong. LOL or was it all along the mothers intent to not have it be a joke as she went shopping? I loved how this question played on the readers mind until the very end of the story.

I also loved the very last graph where a teen and her Mom have what could be a very embarassing chat under normal circumstances but for some reason for this teen who seems very self assured it isn't. and it turns out that her mom and her friends dad had a plan all of their own, while she herself was busily hatching up the things she needed to discuss with her mom. very nicly done story. I really enjoyed it.

Steven:  js (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com

This story was an all-too familiar plot and I've never enjoyed the 'everyone loves to spank and get spanked,' child stories.  What kind of mother would allow the male parent of another child to spank her daughter bare bottom, let alone spank her at all?  And what teenager would seem all giddy about being spanked by their own parents?  This story did nothing for me although it was well written.

Kris:  worsci (at) webtv (dot) net

"Birds chirped.  Down the street, children squealed. A dog barked." Wow, that was an incredibly intense includsion of detail–NOT.  This did nothing to bring me into the story or make me feel for the setting.  It could have, if the description came from the character and she reflected on it or felt something about it, giving us insight into the way she felt.  This just feels about as generic as something can be made.  Why even include the comment?  This is a technically correct story, but it feels as cold as this less than interesting list of facts about the setting.

Alex:  alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk

This writer (and as she uses her name as heroine its not hard to recognise) has a nice talent for turning conventional spanking situations inside out and then back again and she has managed it once more with this little domestic tale of a girl whose needs are turned into reality in an unexpected way. Very nicely written and the situation, although in real life highly unlikely, was well contrived.