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| Mom's Birthday Spanking Zadigski zadigskiz (at) yahoo (dot) com Category: Coming of Age
Fourteen year old Eric said, "Mom, today is your fortieth birthday, and that ought to be really special. Is there anything that I can get you for your birthday?" Just then his father came through the kitchen, and said, "Yeah, what your mother really wants is a hard spanking. Your mother is a pervert who is in to being spanked." His father left and slammed the door on his way out. For a minute, there was a shocked silence in the kitchen. Eric and his 17 year old sister, Heather, were just shocked that their father would say something like that. The face of their mother, Doris, just turned bright red. "HE ISN'T GETTING AWAY WITH THAT!" shouted Eric, jumping up. "No, no," said Doris, "I don't want either of you two to say anything to your father about this. Your father is upset, he wants to buy a boat that I don't think we can afford. So he is angry, when he calms down, he will be ashamed of what he did. Watch and see if I am not right." After a long silence, Eric said, "Wait a minute, if Dad is not giving you your birthday, I call dibs on it." "Eric, stop it. Eric, no, you can't do this to me, I am your mother!" By this time, Eric already had his mother over his knees and was counting the spanks, "One, two ,three, four, five, this bathrobe gives you too much protection." He pulled her bathrobe up, and continued spanking on her thin nightgown. He counted up to thirteen. "Eric! Don't you dare pull my nightgown up, I haven't got any panties on! Stop!" "Ah heck, Mom, and I was counting on pulling them down." Eric went right on spanking his mother's bare bottom. When he got to thirty, he paused and asked his sister, "Do you want to add any spanks?" "No, you are doing a great job. Keep right on going." Eric counted up to forty spanks, then started add spanking for "One to be good on, one to grow on, one to have true love, one to be happy. " He went on that way for another twenty-five spanks, ending with "And one because your bottom is so nice to spank!" Then he helped his mother to get back on her feet. Doris rubbed her bottom as she said, "I ought to spank you , Yong Man. You are awful!" But she laughed, hugged and kissed him. Then hugging her daughter as well, she said ,"Thanks, that was the best birthday spanking I ever had!" |
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| Zoey:
zprymantis (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com This story had a rather unusual plot for a spanking story. I'd have to wonder if perhaps Doris hadn't handed down the spanko gene to her son, as he certainly took to spanking her like a fish to water. Still, as a mother myself, and a spanko, imagining my son spanking me left me feeling sort of squicked, but I won't hold that against the author! |
| Alex:
alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk There is something slightly squicky, and also perversely titillating, about a young boy spanking his mother's bare bottom and I suspect the author recognised both elements in writing this story. He or she has avoided the squicky by not dwelling on any sexual reactions by either participant, but in so doing has also killed the excitement. It hits a midline course which falls between two stools and succeeds only in being slightly bland. It's nice enough and portrays a far more liberal household than I've ever encountered but, yanno, it's fiction. I would have liked the author to show a little more courage in describing the impact of this event on the parties concerned and it might have then fallen into 'Edge' but had a lot more grit. Nice and sweet but not exceptional for me. |
| CK:
CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com This is an enjoyable story in what seems to be the 2008 SSC's most popular category, the "Coming of Age" one. Eric stepped in to administer his mother's bare-assed (eventually) birthday spanking when his father refused to do so and the teenager did an admirable job of it. Of course in RL this whole dynamic would be quite questionable, especially since both Eric and his watching older sister (Heather) were informed quite bluntly (by their angry father) that their mother (Doris) enjoys being spanked erotically–that means that the birthday spanking could certainly be considered as incestuous in nature, especually since Heather declined to participate herself. I'm hoping that she (Heather) decided to save her own arm to deliver her father's upcoming bare-butt blistering, a truly punitive one for his terrible behavior. Telling his teenaged children, using insulting terminology, that their mother was a spankophile, that was totally contemptible conduct made only worse by the mother's weak attempt to excuse it. (Even if the teenagers already knew or at least suspected that their mother was a spanko-bottom, calling her a "pervert" in front of them was inexcusable marital behavior.) The spanking activity itself, however, was quite entertaining as a pure fantasy account… |
| Kris:
worsci (at) webtv (dot) net We gain no insight into Eric's coming of age (or, alternatively, if the author wished to do something different for Coming of Age, the mother's). There's nothing except the implied titlation of spanking him mother to mark a landmark in his maturity. Did the spanking arouse him? Disgust him? Did he feel guilt at an inappropriate erection elicited by the sight of his mother's bare bottom? Or was he leering in delight at the feel of the fobidden? Did he perhaps dare to masturbate later that night, groping himself to Oedipal fantasies that will leave him with a Mommy fetish later in life? There may be a story here, but this is just the bare bones relating of an event, not details or a perspective that might indicate what made it special. |