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| I Feel Tiny Wayward Maiden waywardmaiden (at) gmail (dot) com Category: Parody Tribute This
is my tribute to "I Feel
Pretty" but only the part that Maria
sings. If you don't know the song, you can listen to it right here: Youtube Video Link I feel tiny,
Oh so tiny, I feel tiny and whiny and scared And my hiney I'm afraid will very soon be bared He is mean-faced When by my waist He tosses me across his knee I am disgraced But from his steel grip I can't flee I feel shivers My heart quivers As my panties drop down to the floor He delivers One hard spank, then, two, three and more I am squealing He's unfeeling As my bottom turns bright apple red He is stealing The last of my pride - every last shred My bum's burning Tummy churning As this spanking just goes on and on I am learning That he has both the brains and the brawn He has stopped now And makes me vow To be a good girl all day long He won't allow For me to do one little thing wrong I do so swear He says, "Nose there," And off into the corner I go Ever aware That I do reap the thing that I sow |
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| Kris
Worsci: worsci (at) webtv (dot) net That was adorable! I can just see Maria whirling around, belting this out. This fit well enough I had no trouble at all singing this one in the shower. |
| CK:
CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com "West Side Story" is one of my favorite musicals, in spite of its sad ending, and I found this to be a clever parody of one its best-known songs that captures the helplessness and nervousness of an impending and unavoidable punishment in a light manner. My one minor quibble would be the too limited use of punctuation, which should be used in poetry (which song lyrics generally are) as well as prose. |
| Mary:
gemcollector2001 (at) yahoo (dot) com I found this little song to be very cute and also very funny, the writer managed to grab the feelings of a spankee and mix them very well with the original lyrics I believe anyway quite nicely. I was able to envision myself as the actress from the movie "Pretty Women" while being spanked to this song. I really liked this alot. |
| Alex:
alexbirch (at) blueyonder (dot) co (dot) uk This is a cute, well put together little parody of 'I feel pretty' though I feel the 'poet' has been a little timid in only doing repeats of the chorus. I would have been mucho impressed if she(I assume she) had attempted the verse too. Yes it's nice, scans most of the time, and you can sing along to it. I find this kind of parody a little hard to review by conventional story guidelines but nice enou |
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Jess: peaceluvnbooks (at) clovermail (dot) net And yet on a reread, I wasn't sure if it was meant to be as light-hearted as I had first taken it. I wonder if the person receiving the spanking really believed it unfair? It wasn't clear to me whether this piece was meant to describe a playful spanking between partners or a serious punishment one given by someone who truly is "unfeeling" and pride-stealing. Rhyming can be difficult and this author managed not to make their words seem forced or contrived. I could hear this song in my head and the writer's words fit nicely into the melody. I feel the piece was very creative and does a nice job of portraying the thoughts that can go through one's head during a spanking. |