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Y Lee Coyote
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Category: M/M or F/F

"Come in." yelled fourteen-year-old Kelly in response to the knock on his door.

"Your mother and I have come to a decision." said the lad's father as he entered.

Kelly turned to face him.

"We agree with you that you are too old to spank."

Kelly's face lit up like a nova.  He had been lobbying for a couple years for that.

"Thanks, Dad.  It really means a lot to me since I'm starting high school tomorrow."

"Here is one more thing that you'll need for school."  said his dad handing him a small package.  "Go on open it."

Kelly quickly ripped off the paper and discovered an unfamiliar object.  As he examined it, his father explained.  "It's a tawse, son.  That's what I'll use now instead of spanking you."

The lad looked puzzled.

"Well, like I said before, you're too old for a spanking so I'll use your tawse.  I'll demonstrate.  You need know what this is about.  Please stand up, take down your jeans and boxers and bend over the bed."

"But…"

"Now, Kelly Jack Hynes!"  He quickly complied with his father's directive on hearing his full name.  He knew what that forebode if he did not.

"I want you to stay still while I demonstrate how this works."  With that he stepped into position and delivered the first cut.

The lad yelled and jumped up.

"Back into position." snapped his dad.

He marveled at how a red stripe appeared on Kelly butt.  Just like his hand prints had when he had spanked him but this time his hand did not hurt even the tiniest bit.  Five cuts later, he stopped and told the lad, now sporting a hot red butt, to pull up his pants.

"OK, now you know what will happen if, or should I say when, you misbehave.  Your being spanked days are over just like you wanted."

"Err, err, thanks Dad." not sure about it at all.



The End

© Copyright A.I.L.  August 31, 2008


Readers Comments:
Zad:  zadigskiz (at) yahoo (dot) com

This is a nice little story with a good twist. The kid thinks he is going to escape discipline, but he gets it worse than before.  The use of "forebode" is a bit off in the story.  A college professor advised that it should have been past tense, "he knew what it forbade", but probably "he knew what would happen. , ," might have been better.

 
But I do wonder how this story could have been more interesting.  Possibly if we had a description of what the boy felt as he had to bare his bottom for that wicked looking strap.

Author's reply: Forbade, the past tense of forbid, is incorrect in this context.  Perhaps the past tense is correct but foreboded is the proper, although awkward, word then.
Zoey:  zprymantis (at) smilingwithteeth (dot) com

Oh my, and the lad can't even argue that being tawsed is still being spanked, because his father is obviously too strict to hear that nonsense.  This story was very descriptive and well written.  It's odd, but to me it felt as if I were reading the text of a comic book.  I am not sure exactly why that is, but it reminded me of the old Jughead comics and instead of imagining people as I read the story, I saw the illustrations instead.  Very nice.
CK:  CrimsnKid6 (at) aol (dot) com

Ah, well, it looks like Dad was playing semantical games here at his teenaged son's expense–or the expense of the boy's backside, to be more precise–by interpreting the term "spanking" quite narrowly. Of course, as many of us spankophiles who spent parts of our childhoods looking up "spank" in the dictionary would already know (and I double-checked just to make certain of my middle-aged memory), Noah Webster does indeed back up the father's technical interpretation that being tawsed (or in general strapped) is not being "spanked," a tawse being neither a human palm nor strictly a flat implement.

This variation on the "Be Careful What You Wish For" story depends on Dad's misinterpretation of the intended (and rather obvious) meaning of his son Kelly's request, i.e. that he no longer be subject to parental corporal punishment, and it's almost certain that the paternal "misunderstanding" was intentional.

So why didn't the boy, instead of acquiesing without argument, protest by saying something like "That's not what I meant by not being spanked"? Well, I'll venture that he realized that he'd been outsmarted and outmaneuvered, and also that he might've anticipated that objecting too much likely would've resulted in a true disciplinary tawsing for disrespect–and the mere demonstation of the implement's effectiveness supplied more than enough heat to his seat for sitting discomfort in the immediate future.

(I think of Kelly as pretty much a female name, but the male character played by Robert Culp in the old "I Spy" television series was named Kelly.)

Amusing tale of how semantics can emphatically effect a teenager's tail…

Domino:  domino at Domin-o (dot) org (dot) uk

Be careful what you wish for.  An amusing, if predictable story where the teen who thinks he's grown finds himself cut down to size.  Nicely done, though I would question whether 'cut' is the right word for describing a stroke from a tawse.