Spanking the Maid
Dan was outed at his company. A competitor had told everyone that Don and his wife, Carol, were spankos and had even gone to spanking parties. Six months had gone by and the whole things seemed to have blown over when Don's boss called him into his office.
"Don, I have some friends who have this maid. She was a great maid in Brazil, but every so often they would have to, ah, punish her." His boss was clearly embarrassed. "Her employers are looking for, ah, someone to do this here. Do you think you could, ah, take care of this?"
Don agreed and it was arranged that the maid would come to his house early on Saturday. When she arrived, Don was very pleased that she was not a teenager. Her name was Nadia. It didn't help that she didn't speak English and Don didn't speak Portuguese. But with the help of an online language translator, they finally agreed that she was to get on over the knee, bare bottom, hard spanking but there was to be no sex.
Don took Nadia over his knee, lifted her short skirt, and pulled down her panties. All Don could think was, "there are two full moons out tonight!"
Don gave Nadia what he thought was a long, hard spanking. He did do a lot of rubbing of her bottom in between spank sequences. When he finally let her up, she seemed more amused than punished. But she thanked him and left. A week later she returned and brought a paddle and a strap. She told him that her employers wanted her punished harder, that she should be spanked until she cried.
Don felt sorry for Nadia, but he did as requested. Then made her stand in the corner with her very red bottom on display. This didn't happen every Saturday, but it happen often. Don had to admit he was enoying it.
But Carol was being bothered by it. She said, "this poor woman is obviously an illegal immigrant, her employers are exploiting her, and using you to terrorize her."
"I don't think so," was Don's response. "I agree that Nadia is an illegal alien, but she is never reluctant to come here, and the hugs and thanks she gives me are sincere. I think she does things to get a spanking."
"You only want to spank that butt of hers" was Carol's retort. Dan could not deny he enjoyed spanking Nadia.
Their disagreement grew worse with every visit by Nadia. Finally Don decided that he would try to talk to his boss about it after the company party. He and Carol were at the party, when Fred Grossen came in. Fred was an important stockholder and on the company board of directors. Dan had met Fred before, but never his trophy wife, Esmeralda.
Dan said to Carol, "Don t mention Naida."
Carol answered, "That is not Nadia, she only looks like her.."
When they were introduced to Esmeralda, she had this big grin on her face. Esmeralda was Nadia. She spoke perfect English, and had been a citizen for years.
When Don and Carol were leaving, Esmeralda came over and said, "May I send Nadia over tomorrow, along with a very naughty friend?"
Carol whispered, "that would be good because I intend to punish Nadia."
"Uh, oh," Nadia said. "I will be looking forward to tomorrow.."
"Not as much as I will," said Carol.
Barrister
I found this story a bit hard to follow. the style is a bit choppy and confusing and I had to read it twice to make sure I understood it. When I finally did understand it, I thought the plot twist was fun, but the story still felt sort of thrown together as the deadline approached.
C.K. email
IIRC this story "borrows" its title from a mainstream spanking-oriented novel that was published a decade or so ago. (Not that I consider it a problem, but I do believe that a "borrowed" title should be acknowledged.)
This narrative involves a supposedly straightforward situation which I did suspect right away involved more than it appeared to at first glance. The boss asking Dan to spank the purportedly wayward maid because of his (Dan's) known fondness for erotic/playful spanking, that struck me as incogruous given that the woman's spankings were described as disciplinary in nature. Nadia (the maid) bringing along implements to make her second "punishment" (and all sunsequent ones) much more intensive, that was another strong hint that she didn't consider them truly punitive; spankees who actually dread their chastisements generally don't attempt to make them considerably more painful.
So the story's denouement wasn't particulary surprising to this reader, but it was nonetheless an enjoyable ending--I'm left wondering it Nadia/Esmeralda will end up regretting that her actions have made Dan's wife Carol rather jealous once she finds herself bare-bottom-up over the knee of a retributive womanly disciplinarian. The tone of their final exchange suggested to me that Carol is going to try to administer more "discipline" than her spanko-submissive victim will enjoy undergoing, that Carol intends to treat their upcoming encounter as a challenge in that way.
When Esmeralda referred to bringing along "a very naughty friend," I assumed that she meant that she would be there in both of her personas (Nadia the maid and herself the trophy wife), herself being "chastised" by Dan for deceitfulness and the Nadia persona being "disciplined" by Carol for making her jealous RE her husband's attentions.. Yikes! She'd better be a so-called "pain slut" if she's really looking forward to that spanking session...
sarah nada email
"Spanking the Maid" is well paced, with a unique premise. I liked the spanking sequences, and the ending came as a surprise. Entertaining.