Doing His Duty
SSC2009: COA Doing His Duty (t/FM, spank, belt, role reversal)
Summary: A teen youth confronted with irresponsible parents acts
decisively.
_The following story is fiction about family spanking with role reversal. If this subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. I was inspired to write this by seeing a faux photo of the first spanking scene described._
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Doing His Duty
by
Y Lee Coyote
Thirteen-year-old Scott was appalled when his mom came into the house at dinnertime after an afternoon with her girlfriends for she was, to say the least, tipsy. Worse, she did not care that she had behaved irresponsibly Not only was dinner not ready but she had driven while drunk. Her attitude quickly got to him and he knew that something had to be done.
He sat down on the bed and yanked his errant mom across his lap. She was not in any condition to resist the strong and determined youth. He got a good grip on her waist and began to spank her right over her spray-on jeans. It took a while for before her alcohol numbed body responded but she was soon yelling and bawling like every errant child getting a well-earned spanking over an exasperated parent's lap.
Scott was just finishing up when his father came in. He was shocked seeing his son spanking his wife and took great exception. Scott delivered a few more hard spanks and ordered his bawling mom into the corner. She was fortunate that he had not pealed down her skin-tight jeans. As she stumbled into the corner, Scott took on his dad. He ignored his objections and berated him for not keeping mom in line. "Look at how she dresses like a high school slut. She drove home DWI! You are to blame just as much as she is." barking out her most recent transgressions.
His father was stunned. He was so stunned that he could not speak or say anything. He had long regretted that he had knocked up his wife while they were just in high school for had made life much harder. He had not matured any more than she had since then.
Scott was on a roll. Perhaps he could make some changes. He grabbed his father's belt and yanked it out. Then he opened his pants and yanked them down. He also yanked down the old, now grayish tightie-whites and again barked an order. His father bent over just as he had for his own father for the last time only ten years before when he was twenty-one. "Please.." he whined but Scott was not listening.
Scott had decided what he had to do. He folded the wide, thick leather belt and found the proper place. He raised and swung the belt. He swung it hard a dozen times watching how red stripes formed and merged leaving his Dad with a hot, red, painful butt and a lot to think about. Scott parked his sobbing Dad in another corner.
Rather than get to his homework, Scott drafted a set of rules. It would be several days before he made them official.
The End
© Copyright A.I.L. June 16, 2009
Jess email
This story seemed a little bizarre and unbelievable. But perhaps if I were more familiar with the "young spanking old" genre I'd have enjoyed it more. But since that's my issue and not the author's, I'd have to say that this was fairly well-written. The prospect of something like this situation ever coming true in real life is rather intriguing I admit.
Kessily email
Hmm, I think...that this is a fantasy a lot of us have had, especially when we were kids. The idea of being able to take the adults, who are supposed to be the responsible ones and often aren't, to task and make some changes. As far as realism goes...well, possibly a strong teenage boy could overpower his mom and spank her but the father submitting? Allowing his son to take down his pants and then bending over for the belt? Probably not.
And I can see the justification of being so angry that someone you love was drinking and driving that you go beyond the normal parent/child relationship, but throwing in the fact that your dinner isn't prepared on time seems a bit petulant, especially when he goes on to berate his father for 'not keeping her in line'. It made me disgusted that the father would allow that.
Do we need realistic spanking stories? Hell no! Wouldn't hardly be any to read if we did, but this one just doesn't resonate as even vaguely possible so it's hard to identify with. It does read as a teenage boys fantasy of being in charge though and if it had ended with him 'waking up' at the end I could have felt entirely different about it. But I will say it was well-written, put together, and I know fans of role reversal stories will enjoy this.
Barrister
An interesting, if rather unrealistic story. The pre-story and post-story commentary are almost as long as the story itself. Regardless, the story is well-written and imaginative.