Mouse and Tiger
I see her as I enter the classroom. Mrs. Emma Kole, my teacher and obsession. In her late twenties, with curly black hair and warm features, she is beautiful. She asks everyone if they brought their homework. My work is in my bag, but I raise my hand and apologise for forgetting it. She glares at me. Third time this month. I'm going to get the paddle.
After class everyone leaves except me. She lectures me a bit, then gets out the paddle. I bend over the desk. She spanks me hard. Twenty strokes. She breathes heavily with exertion and pleasure. I moan with every impact. My bottom thrust high, wanting it all, even as I struggled to stay in position. Real pain warring with bizarre joy inside my mind.
When it is over I straighten up and rub my bum. I 'discover' my homework and give it to her, along with an embarrassed smile. She bursts out laughing, telling me that I got spanked for nothing, patting me on the shoulder. My heart aches more than my bottom.
Then it is time to go home. I have a bus to catch. Her husband is waiting to pick her up. She greets him as I amble along, still sore. They exchange words and she gestures towards me, grinning. He swivels his head to look at me and our eyes meet across the parking lot. I convey my feelings through my gaze and he suddenly realises everything.
I pour everything into this soundless communication. All my love for Emma, his wife, and my contempt and hatred for him, simpleton that he is. And the knowledge that Emma feels the same way. Were I a crude person, I would moon him to drive the point home, show him the rosy evidence of my victory.
He is strong. He is rich. He is successful. He is married to a woman who he loves more than life itself. But standing next to him, she looks demure and even bored. He has never experienced her as I experience her, as she bends me over and spanks me. This passion is denied to him and permitted to me. He understands now that his pretty wife likes to punish boys, and that he cannot resolve the problem. He would never allow her to spank him, his stubborn pride ensures that. He can take no action to stop her. He can only go back to his life, playing house with her and buying her jewellery, making love to her and not knowing if she fakes it or not. While I pursue my hidden agenda, seemingly a good but forgetful student who requires frequent discipline, in actuality a man who has intelligence and determination. I desire her, her true, passionate essence.
He gets the mouse, I get the tiger. It must be a lousy deal for him.
He looks away, a stony expression on his face. The point I conveyed is simple and inescapable:
I win, asshole.-------------------------------------
by Exist
Mary Richards email
An interesting twist on the school boy crush on his teacher the jealous hubby exchanging looks with the recently paddled student.. I liked that element of the story it made this fresh. I also enjoyed the mocking from the teacher as the homework was mysteriously found after the spanking another nice touch when it was expected that the teacher would have done something like lecture about being more careful to look for it better or to become remorseful for having spanked. This was a very interesting story with alot of little tid bits that weren't the ordinary when one reads the "norm" when it comes to this fantasy it was well written and kept the reader going without problems it also set up the minds eye viewing very nicely.
Lawrence Kinden email
I really liked this one. I loved the thoughts as fragments as they describe a myriad of felling in short spurts. The description of the paddling, with the heavy breathing and groaning is enough to get my breathing to become a little heavy. The teacher's reaction of "silly boy" is enough of a hint to wonder whether or not she knows of the narrator's fascination or if the narrator is a little unreliable in his assessment of his teacher.
I especially love the end, how it ties to the title, I get the tiger, he gets the mouse, I win. Highly satisfying.
Barrister
Fascinating and well-written story. While it isn't clear how old the protagonist is, he is clearly old enough to have adult thoughts and emotions. I really liked this story. It is above and beyond the usual adolescent spanking story. Good work.
Mija email
First, as I read it, I didn't like this story. Not at all. Despite the hot spanking imagery, despite the school setting, I found the voice of the narrator smug and malicious.
Second, and because of the first point, this is a WONDERFUL story. I love that in 500 words the author made me dislike the narrator, his teacher and her husband. It catches the anger and superiority of the teen coming-of-age moment perfectly. Well written and structured too.
Exceptionally well done!