Coming of Age

Uniformity

Alex Birch

Suspended from her third school in two years, Elizabeth knew her millionaire father would act and so she found herself a reluctant passenger in his Mercedes en route to the private Buchan School for Girls.  The school had a reputation for amazing results with difficult pupils but a covenant of secrecy made methods impossible to unravel.

Elizabeth's stomach churned as they entered the drive,  to see Principal Donaldson, waiting on the step. To her shock, her father dumped her cases onto the drive and said "I will see you in 12 months - and there better be improvements!" No kisses, no hugs. The Principal beckoned that she should follow and she staggered behind with the cases.

"We believe in treating every girl the same here," Donaldson said sharply. "That's why we insist on total uniformity. You can leave your cases here. I want you to look in on Mr James' mathematics class."

Oh fuck, she thought, a school uniform!  Well I'll customize it to MY personality.

Donaldson rapped on a door and pushed the girl ahead of him. She found herself in a large classroom of some 25 girls about sixteen, her own age. The teacher was writing on the board. Everything was normal except.....her face blushed bright red and her mouth gaped.

"Yes," said Donaldson dryly, "all the girls are completely naked. You see even their hair styles are common. We don't like personality here." And indeed every girl had a pageboy type haircut and Elizabeth gasped in horror at the fate which befell her own tresses.

"Donna and Karen..stand up please!" Donaldson rapped and immediately two pretty girls stood to attention, hands by their sides. Elizabeth gasped at the sight of the naked vulvas clearly on display.

"The policy includes pubic hair," Donaldson intoned. "to discourage personal vanity. The girls soon get used to our methods - and being naked in front of the teaching staff."

It was too much for Elizabeth who shrieked and dived for the door, only to leap back as a stinging jolt of electricity shot through her fingers.

Donaldson shook his head sadly. "Silly girl," he said. "I was going to allow you to get naked in your room and then acclimatise over dinner - you never wear clothes again until you leave - but you have forced my hand.  You need to be taught a lesson!  Donna, Karen..help me to strip her if you please!"

Eagerly the two naked girls dived on Elizabeth and began to assist the Principal to divest her of all her clothing as Elizabeth sobbed helplessly. When she was naked she tried to cover herself but got a sharp smack across her bottom.

"Now trying to escape is a serious offence. Bend her over girls! You can discover what twelve strokes of the tawse is like, Elizabeth! Oh you're a hairy little thing too. We'll get Mr James to shave you on the desk afterwards!"

Red faced, Elizabeth swore to herself that she would NEVER misbehave again!

Kessily

Well, this was not your traditional school girl story at all. I'm sure Elizabeth will be very well behaved after leaving this school! I wonder if her father knew how they handled things there, and how he would react, but it's certainly bound to be effect. If not the physical punishments, than the vulnerability of being nude all the time would probably do the trick.

I'd say it fits just fine into the category and word count limitations, and still comes off as a whole and complete story. I like the reform school feel of it, and the change in attitude in the girl. At first thinking she will do things HER way...and then realizing her real situation. It was concise and to the point...great story!

zadigski

This story has everything we all like: the rich spoiled brat, the strict school, the domineering staff, school uniforms, spanking, and humiliation.  It even has the naughty brat realizing that she can't get away with anything.  The brat even repents at the end of the story.

And there is a nice twist in the story.  It is a very good story for this contest.

C.K.

Except for the variation of nudity and full-body shaving (except for the short female haircuts), this story is pretty much a classic "Spoiled brat sent to a strict, CP-oriented institution to adjust his/her attitude" narrative. That's not necessarily a criticism, though, since there are only a handful of basic plotlines in spanking stories and this plot type is a fairly popular one.

However, I do find it a bit implausible (and disappointing) that Elizabeth apparently "surrendered" before even initially being stripped, whipped and shaved--I would've liked to see the conflict involved, both physical and psychological, with Elizabeth trying to remain defiant (and presumably eventually failing to do so) in the face of the attempts by the school's staff, led by Principal Donaldson, to break her into complying with the rules.

There's not enough space to chronicle that uneven, likely doomed (from Elizabeth's perspective) struggle, but my personal preference would be the girl showing nervous, even gloomy resistance (knowing the odds against her) to start out with

Given her reaction in this story, she obviously missed her ideal historic role--premier of France in June of 1940...