Extra Fun With Musical Chairs
(All rights reserved. This story's setting is July of 2009, beginning at a social function of the Sisterhood for Spousal Correction located at a local chapter's suburban meeting hall in the U.S.A.)
[This story is based on the picture 'The Naughty Chair.']
Pamela McMichael, the local chapter's coordinator, motioned at the straightbacked armless chair isolated between the two groups of twelve similar chairs, six back-to-back.
"That's the naughty chair," she explained, "Which will be occupied by the losers of each round of musical chairs. The woman eliminated will sit on it and put the losing man bare-assed over her knee."
The thirteen casually-attired wives, standing by one set of chairs, chortled gleefully; each of them gripped the handle of a flat-backed wooden hairbrush or a moderate-sized paddle.
"How long does she get to wallop him, Pam?" asked Candy Waverly, smacking a lexan spanker against her palm. Several husbands, all wearing Sisterhood punishment outfits and clustered around the other dozen chairs, inhaled nervously.
"Exactly three minutes," Pamela replied, "For his initial offense of being eliminated. That's his first spanking."
Jake, Candy's spouse, gulped. "FIRST spanking?"
Barbara Royalton grinned. "After that three-minute bottom-warming, one chair will be removed from each group for the newly-eliminated players to sit on. Then ALL eliminated twosomes will assume an over- the-knee paddling position upon the woman's chair, naturally with the men bare-bottom-up, while the remaining players stand up for the next round."
Her husband Paul smiled ruefully. "It's apparent what happens when the music begins again."
Christina Remington nodded. "Spankings all around for the eliminated males, until the music stops. Therefore the sooner a male is eliminated, the more his naked buttcheeks get blistered - that's the penalty for poor performance."
Peter Reynolds snorted. "What about the poorly-performing females, what's their penalty?"
"Penalties for us girls?" His wife Miranda shook her head in disbelief. "Don't be silly, sweetheart."
Candy giggled. "Sore arms from swinging our paddling implements so much, but I'll take that soreness over a stinging seat anytime."
Pamela snickered. "I'll second that sentiment. After each round each eliminated lady will write her spanked partner's name on a slip of paper, which I'll collect for the drawing bowl."
"The sooner a guy is eliminated, the more slips with his name in the bowl," Peter mused.
"Exactly," his spouse concurred. "Pam's husband Eric is away, so she's volunteered to handle the music here - but she should receive compensation for that."
Paul winced. "How many swats from her?"
"Twelve minutes' worth, honeybun," his lifemate stated, "With the lucky winner of her drawing bent over the naughty chair's back for a wicked licking courtesy of her Canadian school strap."
Christina chuckled. "Ohhhh, is that ever going to hurt soooo much!" Pamela beamed brightly. "I'll make certain of that, IN SPADES! Let's get started, everyone..."
Four hours later, atop the Royaltons' king-sized bed, Barbara sat astride her prone, nude husband's back while gently massaging aloe cream onto his deeply-glowing, magenta-hued posterior.
"Losing out in the second round," Paul muttered, "Spending the game with Miranda's infernal hairbrush whacking away at me..."
His black-haired beauty tittered. "You WON Pam's drawing, anyway. Boy, did that rubber strap ever explode against this bouncy bare bubblebutt."
He grimaced in pained recollection. "Lucky me!"
Down deep, a sincere commentary...
{The End}
Mary Richards email
This is a cute use of the picture from that category, but I think the author could have chosen a a new base of characters to write about for the contest and not picked one from this cute series. I think it skirts the outside of the rules of the contest just a bit close for my personal likes because the theme and the people in it have all been posted before.
I do like the way the author puts a new spin on an old game with of course the spanking theme to it. That was very nicely done! The writing is very good and it is an easy to read story that has very good flow to it and allows your mind to picture the setup of the room and the surroundings as well as the people in the story really nicely.
Kessily email
Despite the fact that stories arrive with author names stripped off, I instantly knew who this one was by, of course. The style, topic, and characters are distinctive and well known to those who read F/M since there is a long-standing series about them. However this piece works well as a stand-alone, as required by the contest.
As usual the poor husbands are subject to the whims of their wives unfair or fair it's all the same to the wives, and the men have no choice. A common theme in these stories is a 'game of luck' in which the husbands rack up penalty swats while playing. The author has done this with card games, as well as sports games in the past, as I recall. This time the game is Musical Chairs and, as always, he has taken the time to explain the rules and penalties to such a degree that the game could probably be played in rl by anyone.
It's a fun story, and those who like to read F/M will probably enjoy it a lot. For myself, even if I didn't enjoy F/M I would probably have enjoyed just the detail of the game rules and would love to see this played out somewhere. It fits both the count and the category in which it was entered.
sarah nada email
The ladies of the Sisterhood for Spousal Correction are back with another variation on spanking party games. The wives are cheerfully strict, the husbands cheerfully punished, and the rules lovingly explained. The story works well with the picture "The Naughty Chair," and the ending is kind of sweet. The length and severity of the spankings pushes the bounds of realism, but they are certainly fun to read about.